I think that your poem is very touching and its nice that you think about you niece like that and she sounds very nice and cute. I think that you should change some colours 'cause it's all yellow and black but apart from that I think that your web page is very cool. By Krista I liked reading about the 7 things I didn't need to know about you and also you are writing some very cool poetry. Some more photos would be great. Perhaps you could phone your big sister and see if it would be OK to post photos of your nieces. By Mum Hey Bianca I really like your pages their very excellent! I think I liked the Goals the best though although I think you could improve a little bit by putting more goals in maybe but you don't have to I'm just here to give advise:) By Erica:) Liked your webpage, it had a great feel and fantastic colours. Your writing is excellent, but I would love some more poems and photos as well as a video review.Overall a really good web. By Mr Stove
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